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Re: A good day
Also, I very much agree with Azila: You need to make it a new line when someone new is talking. That's not even a suggestion, you just have to. It ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: A good day
Hey! I really liked this story! I think it was very "alive". It wasn't some big, epic moment or someone having a life-altering experience, it was just an everyday. You ...
Apr 8, 2011 -
Re: Innocence
I don't really know much about photography, but I like this. It's sweet and summerish!
Apr 6, 2011 -
Re: ~This Tree is Me~
This was amazing. Simply amazing.
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: My Soldier In Gray
Or hiding in a tree? Or are you hiding in a tree? Next there came a letter, From the leader of your crew, That things have gotten better, The next ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: A Ghost In This World
Outside I could hear children’s delighted screams of joy. As they spent their day in the playground, soaring on the wings of imagination, the sun was shining down upon them. ...
Apr 5, 2011 -
Re: I Believe... Do You?
This piece is simply beauty transformed to words. I honestly loved reading it. The mood was really sad, but at the same time it gave you the feeling of knowing ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Watched - Chapter 1
There is a prologue, so don't be fooled by this being chapter one, previous happenings has occured :) Hannah stood still in the doorway for a minute, looking after Molly. ...
Apr 2, 2011 -
Re: Hope Lives
The thing about reading your stuff now, is that I'm so aware of how young you are. I love this poem, but what I love the most about it is ...
Apr 1, 2011 -
Re: Scars: Impending Storm Chapter Three
Hey! I got into your writings, so I'll review this as well! First of all, I love the first part where we see Jamie (I think) in the morning. I'm ...
Mar 31, 2011 -
Re: Ecliptic
Hey! First of all I have to say that I really like your writing style! Your sentences have a nice flow and you have neatly sectioned paragraphs. I couln't find ...
Mar 30, 2011 -
Re: Watched - Random excerpts
These are two excerpts from the whole story, they will not be placed with each other and I'm not sure where in the story I'm going put them, but it ...
Mar 28, 2011 -
Re: The Promise
Hey! First of all I just want to say that i absolutely LOVED this piece! Normally I'm not very good at keeping focused while reading short stories, because I'm not ...
Mar 27, 2011 -
Re: Passing
Hey! This story was absolutely great to read! When she was running across the street I was thinking that shit it's so mainstreem if she just dies now, but she ...
Mar 23, 2011 -
Re: Running
Hey! This was a great piece, I enjoyed reading it and it got my attention at a very sleepy time, so well done! For me it was a very serious ...
Mar 22, 2011
